南昌外国语学校2019——2019学度上学期高二年级英语短文改错专项练习(附解析)

高二年级英语短文改错专项练习 命题及审题人：邹乐铭 2019.12.2 【一】

Most students are great pressure.They complain that life lacks happy.

However,I think life is look like a long river,which is full of change.There is no escape for it.Therefore,what we can do is to smile on them.Smile can light up our passion to life,and it helps us move forward on the road which we will discover our talents and enjoy the true adventure in life.

Just as the saying go, “Life is very much like a mirror:If you smile upon it,it will smile back.But if you frown and look doubtfully on it,you will get a similar look in return.”However,anyway,smile on life.

【二】

The U.N. Chief warned that war-torn Yemen is “one step away from famine.”He was said more than 21 million Yemenis – 80 percent of the population – are on need of some form of humanitarian assistance.

Over 2 million people are starving nationwide, included 370,000 children whom are in severe hunger. That is an increase of 65 percent

compared to the year before the conflict began.Food prices have surged 20 percent since fighting begin last year

Worryingly, cholera is starting to appear, with 61 confirmed cases and 1,700 suspecting cases. O'Brien said the United Nations and its humanitarian partners are establishing 21 cholera treatment centers, so they would be insufficient to stop the escalating spread of the disease. Additional, the humanitarian chief said more than 10,000 children under age of five have died from preventable disease.

【三】

How is everything going recently? I’m writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold a party to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I’ll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It’s high time that I do something to repay them.

How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I’m looking forward to hear from you soon.

【四】

With the improvement of people's living standards, more and more people possess their own car. Some thought it is good to own a

car. First, it's an convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation, that saves people much time on the trip. It also makes businesses and industries to develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give waste gases and pollute the environment around. Have too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lacking parking lots are another big problem.

As far as I concerned, we ought to think carefully before buying cars. Even if we have cars, we should use it less.

【五】

Dasharath Kumar, 28, is now the more demanded barber in his small village in Gulbarga in Karnataka in southern India. The crazy way is styling people hair with a small comb or a burning candle instead of a pair of scissors. The ‘cutting-edge’ technique had become so popular among men in his village and nearby towns that his salon is always full of clients – both young and old alike.

While Dasharath joined his family business where he was 15, the unique idea only clicked on him five years ago after power went out at work one day. With practice and support his loyal clients who let him burn their hair, Dasharath could practice his exclusive skills over the years.

Both Dasharath’s popularity and customer base have rose quickly. Started with only 20 pence, customers now happily pay him £1 on his novel way of haircut.

【六】

A 10-year-old girl from Changsha in Hunan refuses to study English and insists on learning Korean because of her love for South Korean pop idols.The girl told her mother that Korean was the only foreign language she wanted to learn,even if English is compulsory and essential for entry into most mainland university.The girl has a encyclopedic knowledge of Korean pop stars,and her greatest interest was talked about South Korean dramas and music.Her parents had banned her with using the internet and watch television at home so she caught up on her favorite shows that she stayed with her grandparents on the weekend,her mother said.South Korean pop culture is huge popular on the mainland,especially among the young,whom diligently follow every trend that emerge from the country.

【七】

Recently, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language called the Web Language. Our class had a discussion about if we should welcome to the Web Language the other day. Forty percent of the students think it ridiculously. In their opinions, it does no good to helping people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English. Besides, it'll make Chinese less standard, finally ruined our mother tongue. However, sixty percent of our class is fond of it. We think that it is simple, convenient, and helpful in expressing their thoughts. Personally, it's not good habit to use the Web Language. It may be popular, but you may also make yourself misunderstand.

【八】

I was born in small village. Small as it is, but it's very beautiful. There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we make kites in our own and fly it on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer,the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Besides, the wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn, the corns at the foot of hills were ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and make snowmen. Attracting by the beauty of my hometown,I often spend my vacations there.It is always the place which I can relax myself.

【二】

1.去掉said前面的was

2.on改成in

3.included改成including 4.whom改成who或者that

5.fighting后面的begin改为began

6.suspecting改成suspected，suspect和case存在动宾关系，表示疑似病例用suspected

7.so改成but，上文说联合国及其人道主义伙伴正在建立21个霍乱治疗中心，下文说他们仍不足以遏制疾病的快速蔓延，两个分句为转折关系。

8.Additional改成Additionally 9.在age前面加the

10.disease改成diseases 【三】

【小题1】删除more 考查上下文。本句为文章开始的句子，之前并没有提到关于生日的事情，所以more没有上下文的语境串联。

【小题2】hold改为held 考查时态。本句的时间状语是the other day前几天，这是一般过去时的时间状语，所以本句也应该使用一般过去时。

【小题3】or改为and 考查固定搭配。短语and so on等等。句意：从我的朋友和父母亲那里我收到了很多礼物，包括卡片、书、CD等等。

【小题4】having后加a 考查固定搭配。固定短语have a good time玩的开心。句意：在聚会的时候，我们唱歌跳舞，玩的很开心。

【小题5】his改为their 考查代词。本句中their指代前面的my friends。句意：因为朋友们的帮助和陪伴，我向他们表示了感谢。

【小题6】At改为In 考查固定搭配。短语in the meantime同时。句意：同时，我向父母亲表示了真诚的感谢，感谢他们养育了我。

【小题7】that改为which 考查非性定语从句。在英语中不能使用that引导非性定语从句，本句中which指代前面一句话的内容，在定语从句中充当主语。

【小题8】houseworks改为housework 考查名词单复数。名词housework家务，这是一个不可数名词，没有复数形式。

【小题9】do改为did或do前加 should 考查虚拟语气。句式It is time that sb did/should do sth是某人做某事的时候了。句中可以使用过去时，也可以使用should+动词原形，should不能省略。

【小题10】hear改为hearing 考查动名词。短语look forward to期待，其中的to是介词，后面要接动名词做宾语。

【四】With the improvement of people's living standards, more and more people possess their own . Some

it is good to o

wn a car. First, it's convenient, fast and comfortable means of tra

nsportation,

saves people much time on the trip. It also makes

businesses and industries develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give

waste gases and pollute the environment around.

too ma

ny cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lacking parking lots

are another big problem.

As far as I （加上am）concerned, we ought to think carefully before buying cars. Even if we have cars, we should use less.

【五】

1.more改成most 2.people改成people’s

3.or改成and，表示并列而不是选择，理发师使用一把小梳子和一根燃烧的蜡烛给人理发，而不用剪刀。

4.had改成has，全文为一般现在时，不能用过去完成时 5.where改成when，时间状语从句

6.clicked后面的on去掉，click是及物动词，此处表示“突然想到一个奇特的主意”

7.went out改成went off，表示停止运作，爆炸

8.support后面增加of

9.have后面的rose改成risen

10.on改成for，为...付钱应为pay...for...

【六】1、if改成though（even if表假设，even though表真实）2、university改universities 3、a改成an 4、talked改成talking 5、with改成from（ban sb from doing sth 禁止....做，a ban on 针对...的禁止） 6、watch改成watching 7、that改成when 8、huge改成hugely（adv修饰adj） 9、whom改成who（先行词作主语） 10、emerge改成emerges（指代every trend用单数）

【七】①as改为with；②if改为whether；r③去掉welcome后面的to；④ridiculously改为ridiculous；⑤opinions改为opinion；⑥ruined改为ruining；⑦is改为are；⑧their改为our；⑨good前加a；⑩misunderstand改为misunderstood。

【考点】短文改错

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇议论文，关于是否使用网络语言最近班上进行了讨论，本文列举了两种主要观点和原因。

①考查固定用法。with the development of…固定用法，“随着......的发展”，故as→with。

②i考查连词。about后的宾语从句，引导词作“是否”解，只用whether，故if改为whether。

③考查及物动词。句中welcome是及物动词，后面直接加宾语不用加介词，此处指欢迎网络语言，故去掉to。

④考查形容词。此处it指的是网络语言，作it的宾语补足语指网络语言是可笑的，用形容词，故ridiculously 改为ridiculous。

⑤考查名词。opinion表示“观点”是不可数名词，没有复数形式。故opinions 改为opinion。

⑥考查动词形式。句中主语it指的是网络语言，和动词ruin是主动关系，在此作状语，用现在分词，指网络语言破坏了我们的母语。故ruined 改为ruining。

⑦考查主谓一致。句中class指班里的学生们，主语是60%的学生，是复数。谓语与之一致也用复数，故is改为are。

⑧考查代词。此处指我们用它来表达我们的想法简单、方便和有用，表示“我们的想法”，故their改为our。

⑨考查冠词。句中habit是可数名词，此处表示一种好习惯要加冠词a，故good前加a。

⑩考查过去分词。句中yourself和misunderstand是被动关系，指你自己被误解，make sb. do sth.动词原形be后加过去分词表被动，故misunderstand 改为misunderstood.

【点评】本题考点涉及固定短语、连词、动词、形容词、名词、主谓一致、代词、冠词以及过去分词等多个知识点的考查，覆盖面广，综合性强，区分度高。

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