专业英语四级(作文)模拟试卷47(题后含答案及解析)

题型有： 6. WRITING

PART VI WRITING (45 MIN)

SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN)

1． China’s State Council revised the government’s recruitment regulations to enlist college students for the army and the age limit can be extended to 24 for those with a bachelor’s degree. Some people think that it’s a good policy. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: College Graduates Joining the Army: a Beneficial Policy

正确答案： College Graduates Joining the Army: a Beneficial Policy It is reported that more and more graduates from Chinese universities and colleges are expected to join the army. As far as I am concerned, this policy is beneficial to both college graduates and the army’s future construction. For one thing, it is beneficial to college graduates, especially those who are eager to find a job in this competitive society which is deeply influenced by the economic recession. First, it is an alternative way to relieve the pressure of job-hunting due to economic downturn and extra supply of graduates. Second, the government pays for university education of those servicemen, which will save college graduates from poor families a lot of money for future use. Finally, college graduates will have more chances of getting promoted or receiving knowledge for future development. For another, the move to recruit more college graduates has been regarded as a way to sharpen Chinese army’s high-tech edge, which will be helpful for Chinese army to uplift the quality of servicemen so as to serve our nation better in the modern society. Taking the above mentioned points into consideration, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that college graduates joining the army is a beneficial policy.

解析： 本题是一个给定观点型题目。写作时既可以从大学毕业生自身的角度来考虑这项的益处，也可以从国家建设方面来分析，还可以综合两者来分析此的益处。 思路1：大学毕业生参军的益处。 在大学毕业生就业难度加大的背景下，参军的益处是多方面的：如缓解就业压力；国家通过支付学生大学学费，减轻家庭经济困难学生的经济负担；另外大学生有机会在继续学习深造。 思路2：大学毕业生参军对的益处。 大学毕业生参军意味着的技术能力得到提高，在当代，一支技术能力强的更有利于保家卫国。 思路3：综合思路1和思路2。 从大学生自身及两方面综合考虑此项的益处。 范文采用了思路3，综合论述了此项的益处。 知识模块：作文

2． Recently, a girl of Tsinghua University has stunned people by presenting her daily schedule on Weibo. The schedule shows that she plans her daily activities by hour, including learning tasks and social activities. It seems that she sleeps only an average of five hours a day. People name her as “xueba” , which mainly describes college students who devote almost every minute of their time to studies. Some support this phenomenon while others do not. What is your view on “xueba”? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Views on “Xueba”

正确答案： My Views on “Xueba” Recently, a new word “ xueba” , which mainly refers to students who devote almost every minute of their time to studies, arouses heated discussion online. In my view, “ xueba” has its own advantages and disadvantages and students should coordinate their time in study and other social activities in a reasonable way. Being a “xueba” has its own advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, being a “xueba” can help college students have a strict self-management over time. When students graduate from high school, a wholly new environment awaits them; dorm life, parties, clubs, social activities, etc. With so many things to adjust, it is no wonder that many students have difficulties in balancing between keeping up their grades and enjoying a colorful campus life. Being a “ xueba” can help students make the most of time. On the other hand, if one spends his time only on studying and hardly participates in social activities, he will gradually lack contact with others and gain little social experience. Therefore, students should spend some time on learning how to get along with others and also acquire knowledge from both their academic and social activities. In a word, college students do not need to be “xueba” , but have to balance their time on study and social activities. To sum up, for college students, their major task is to ensure their learning achievements. At the same time, they should also spare enough time for their social experiences, including participating in various activities, such as joining school clubs, taking part in social practice, taking part-time jobs, etc. Only in this way can they achieve all-round development.

解析： 本题是自由发挥型题目，要求考生就“学霸”进行讨论。近期，一名清华学子马冬晗被称为“清华学霸”，人们之所以这样称呼她，是因为她的学习计划表从周一到周日每个小时都有明确的安排，而这样的学习模式使得她的成绩连续三年班级第一。这样的学习方式引发了大家的关注和讨论。可以从以下两方面对此展开探讨： 产生“学霸”的原因：原因多种多样，包括就业压力、学业压力、学生个人学习兴趣等。 当“学霸”的优、缺点：优点是大学生在没有老师强制管理和父母逼迫的学习环境中，可以避免养成许多不良的习惯，譬如沉迷于网络等；“学霸”的学习方式可以帮助大学生提前把自己要做的事情安排好，并按照计划一个个去完成，更好地管理个人时间。缺点是只集中于学习会减少与他人沟通，缺乏应有的社会实践积累，做不到全面发展。范文主要从“学霸”的优、缺点这一角度展开论述。 知识模块：作文

3． In China, most college students live on campus. They live with roommates from different parts of the country, and many of them are the only child of their families. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic; How to Get Along with Your Roommates?

正确答案： How to Get Along with Your Roommates? Roommates constitute the most intimate partners in our college life. They enable us to have access to different regional subcultures of China, different personalities and uniqueness; some of them will become our life friends. They also comprise our warm dormitory which homes us for four years. These advantages of living with roommates can only be realized through a harmonious relationship. So how to get along well with our roommates proves important. The followings are my suggestions. Firstly, regard roommates as partners. As is known, partners indicate cooperation. So we are set in the journey towards graduation. We must understand, respect, tolerate and help our partners. So long as we are striving for the same goal, we should try to improve partnership and eliminate conflicts. Otherwise, we can’t be survivors of college life. Secondly, treat roommates as teachers. Education is not restricted to classroom. Our roommates are also our teachers. Some of our roommates are crazy football fans; some are skillful in communication; others are straight-A students. So long as we are relegated to student position, we should try to learn from teachers and get along carefully with teachers. All in all, roommates are our partners and teachers in our college life. They are crucial to our growth. And I hope everyone can learn to get along well with his roommates.

解析： 本题是自由发挥型题目，要求考生就如何与室友相处发表看法。宿舍是大学生学习、生活最重要的场所之一，室友之间关系是否融洽对大学生活是否和谐有着重要影响。因此，恰当处理与室友之间的关系显得尤为重要，可分别从以下两点建议出发，论述这一问题： 建议1：把室友当作合作伙伴。 合作伙伴关系要求大家为了一个共同的目标而努力，这样大家就会集中主要精力为实现目标而奋斗，相互尊重，相互扶持，容忍对方的缺点，而不是对合作伙伴吹毛求疵。 建议2：把室友当作老师。 子日：三人行，必有我师焉。我们应当保持谦虚好学的心态，多关注室友身上的优点，乐于、善于向室友学习，取长补短，完善自己。室友之间互帮互助，互相请教是维系关系的润滑剂。 范文选取建议1和建议2加以论述，指出应该将室友当作合作伙伴和老师。 知识模块：作文

4． The protection of China’s intangible cultural heritage is facing a grim situation, particularly in terms of those passed down by storytellers, which are rapidly disappearing. Intangible cultural heritage in China has also fallen into the battle against urbanization and globalization. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Views on the Protection of China’s Intangible Cultural Heritage

正确答案： My Views on the Protection of China’s Intangible Cultural Heritage The Chinese government is now facing a fierce challenge on the protection of its intangible cultural heritage. In my opinion, it is globalization and urbanization that lead to the present dilemma of the protection of China’s intangible cultural heritage. First, people are more likely to be fascinated by foreign cultures. The trend of globalization has exposed Chinese people to a totally new world. They are so curious about those things they have never experienced before. When embracing the new, they may often ignore the old passed down from their ancestors. A good example will be those legendaries passed down by storytellers. Seldom will anybody be aware of the significance of passing these treasures down to our next generation. Second, the rapid expansion of urbanization demolishes our traditional culture. Typical ancient Chinese historical remains and featured buildings are being pulled down and more modern buildings of steel and cement are taking their place. It is more and more difficult for us to find trace of our traditional civilization, for all the newly built towns and cities are so alike that we could hardly tell the one from the other. How could the intangible cultural heritage survive without its host? In conclusion, the protection of China’s intangible cultural heritage is very urgent and still has a long way to go. The government should set sustainable policies in developing economy and make efforts to raise all the people’s awareness and fund those who are engaged in the protection of our intangible culture heritage.

解析： 本题表面上是要求考生给出观点，实际上是一个问题解决型题目，核心问题是对中国非物质文化遗产的看法。写作时，既可以从如何保护非物质文化遗产的角度展开，也可以分析中国非物质文化遗产遭受巨大损失的原因。 思路1：如何保护非物质文化遗产。 文章开篇应首先提出中国保护非物质文化遗产的必要性和紧迫性，然后指出保护非物质文化遗产需要社会和国家的共同努力。从社会角度来说，要大力提高全民的文化保护意识，加强公众对传统民族文化的认同和珍惜；从国家角度来说，要制定和加大投入。保护非物质文化遗产首先要提高到国家战略角度，因为这些非物质文化遗产是国家的财富。保护工作当然需要国家在人力、物力和财力方面给予支持和投入。 思路2：分析造成今天保护非物质文化遗产困境的原因。 文章开篇应首先指出我们国家保护非物质文化遗产的形势不容乐观，然后从两个方面分析造成这一现状的原因。 首先是经济全球化过程中外来文化的冲击，造成很多人崇洋媚外，从而导致了对本国传统文化的忽视和抛弃。其次在于城市化的发展，在大力进行城市化的同时，一些文化遗址、文化建筑被拆除，相应依附在这些载体上的文化因素也随之消失。 范文选取了思路2，分析了造成今天保护非物质文化遗产困境的两个原因，然后提出自己的建议。 知识模块：作文